Within Her Mind...

Songbird B By Songbird B, 9th Nov 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/2zu7huy./
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What fantasies are played out within a woman's mind when she is at the whim of her dreams as she slumbers? Maybe never expressed in the light of day, but when she sleeps...Ah then she succumbs...

Within Her Mind...A Woman's Fantasy...

His kiss was soft
upon her lips..
He held her close,
in his embrace..
And lingering
in love's tender glow,
she traced the
contours of his face..

Her blood still
pounding in her ears..
Her breathing slows,
becoming calm...
This love they shared,
this perfect fit,
as they lay there
in each other's arms.

The languor creeps
now from her limbs..
Steals her from
this drowsy state...
Fighting it
with sleepy will,
she knows too well
that it's too late..

Succumbing to
the morning's kiss..
she feels her
lover gently fade,
back into dreams,
within her mind...
As she wakes
to face another day..



Photo Credit; Michal Marcol freedigitalphotos.net

Tags

Dream World, Dreamer, Dreaming, Dreams, Expressing Feelings, Fantasies, Love And Desire, Love Poetry, Lover, Sexuality, Sleep, Songbird B, Subconscious

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author avatar Songbird B
Hi there! I am Songbird B, and I am a semi-pro female Jazz vocalist. I have a huge passion for Jazz music, and I love writing Poetry, which I have done all my life. I am very Spiritual in my beliefs, and love Photography, Music and Garden Design....I...(more)

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author avatar Pink&Blue
12th Nov 2011 (#)

Such intimacy- I can almost feel it! Well done Songbird!

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author avatar Songbird B
12th Nov 2011 (#)

Thank you Crystal! Lovely to see you on my page..

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author avatar angel_jenny
12th Nov 2011 (#)

well written! Shame she had to wake up ;) x

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author avatar Songbird B
12th Nov 2011 (#)

Hahahaha..oh isn't that the truth, angel-jenny...Thanks for looking in on me..

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author avatar richardpeeej
12th Nov 2011 (#)

What a very vivid imagination you have Bev, you always add a lot of colour to your poems. I loved this one....

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author avatar Songbird B
12th Nov 2011 (#)

Ah, now who says it is just imagination, Richard??? lol So delighted that you enjoyed this my dear friend..

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author avatar aking1614
12th Nov 2011 (#)

Man, I hate it when that happens! :)
Nicely done; our dreams are often oh so real......

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author avatar Songbird B
12th Nov 2011 (#)

ashan, how I can relate to your comment! lol..Lovely to see you here..

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
12th Nov 2011 (#)

Agree with Richard.... beautiful poetry songbird....

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author avatar Songbird B
12th Nov 2011 (#)

Hello geeta...thank you so much..

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author avatar Randy Duckworth
12th Nov 2011 (#)

Absolutely stunning! This was truly great! I could feel the intimacy and the emotion! Keep up the good work! :-)

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author avatar Songbird B
12th Nov 2011 (#)

Why thank you Randy! If it conveys this then I have done my job well my friend..

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author avatar Funom Makama
12th Nov 2011 (#)

This is absolutely wonderful and it is somehow similar to one I just wrote recently, can you check it out?

http://writing.wikinut.com/Erotic-Fantasy-A-Product-Of-Teenage-Infatuation-Experience-of-a-girl/3168brnp/

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author avatar Songbird B
12th Nov 2011 (#)

Hi Funom, Have checked out yours...Great minds! lol. though yours more erotic, and a great write. So glad that you popped in to see me...

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author avatar Delicia Powers
12th Nov 2011 (#)

Beautifully bittersweet...lovely and always so magically lyrical Songbird, thank you!

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author avatar Songbird B
12th Nov 2011 (#)

Delicia, you delight me so much when you look in on me... Thank you for such lovely feedback..

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author avatar Buzz
12th Nov 2011 (#)

Delicia has expressed it better, my dear friend. How very romantic, too. Thanks for mesmerizing me with your choicest words, Bev.:)

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author avatar Songbird B
12th Nov 2011 (#)

Buzz, dear Buzz, I will happily mesmerise you any time my cheeky friend! lol. Lovely to see you, as you always bring a smile to me...\0/x

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author avatar Retired
12th Nov 2011 (#)

:-))

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author avatar Ivyevelyn, R.S.A.
12th Nov 2011 (#)

Beautiful poem, Songbird. I have a good mind to sneak up on Buzz while he is mesmerized.

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author avatar Loverme
12th Nov 2011 (#)

such ecstasy really

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author avatar Retired
12th Nov 2011 (#)

Ah yes ... the tantalising, transitory nature of pleasant waking dreams. Beautifully captured Songbird. Delightful.

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author avatar LOVERME
13th Nov 2011 (#)

When someone asked some one
what's wrong why Loverme's works are not being published
some one answered

SOMETHING IS WRONG SOME WHERE

So be it AMEN

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author avatar Bridgitte Williams
13th Nov 2011 (#)

Sigh...loved this....BRAVO! :-)

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author avatar Shashi Mehta
13th Nov 2011 (#)

Soft and beautiful.

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author avatar Carol
13th Nov 2011 (#)

You write such beautiful poetry Songbird, well done!

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author avatar Tranquilpen
20th Nov 2011 (#)

What a provocative, sexy poem, masterfully produced by a Mistress Of The Quill. Thank you Bev :-))

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