Would I Be Blessed To See...!!!

Sana Rose By Sana Rose, 15th Aug 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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I wrote the first stanza more than a month ago. Today I just worked it out because I wanted a prompt and it came out in 10 minutes. This is a wistful work, and looking at how much the world has changed for the worst...

Would I Be Blessed To See...!!!

The chill is enveloping me...
Would I be blessed to see
The world entrapped in each rain drop
And find something to keep my hope...!

The warmth is forsaking me...
Would I be blessed to see
The good things that vaporize
Into thin air, before we realize...!

The emptiness is haunting me...
Would I blessed to see
The bygone images of bliss,
That you and I do miss...!

The narrowness is choking me...
Would I be blessed to see
The closed doors of the heart
Once more open wide apart...!

- August 15th, 2011
© Sana Rose 2011


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author avatar Sana Rose
A medical student with a love story with the pen since I was thirteen. Published poet at 22 and has completed a second collection and my first novel. Visit me at: www.sanarose.com

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author avatar Tranquilpen
16th Aug 2011 (#)

Excellent read Sana Rose. We should count our many blessings everyday rather than dwell on the negatives.

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author avatar Sana Rose
17th Aug 2011 (#)

Thank you, sir. :) That's true.. But this is just a reminder to humanity...

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