You - With Love

Don Rothra By Don Rothra, 17th Sep 2012 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/1-jpimuk/
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This is a love poem that I wrote in 2003 about the beauty of love.

You

All the beauty in the world cannot compare with the beauty that true love instills in your heart. There are many discriptions of love, but true love can never compare with anything.

You - With Love

A summer stroll upon a beach,
With no one else around,
A midnight fire that crackles low,
A blanket on the ground.

A rising sun in early morn,
That dries up all the dew,
All these things are beautiful,
But no more so than you.

A country farm with fields of green,
Shows peace and harmony.
A babbling brook, a wading pool,
A squirrel up in a tree,

All these scenes are places
That are beautiful it’s true.
But they would just be places,
If I wasn’t there with you.

By Don Rothra
2003

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I am a retired country music entertainer and published poet and song writer. I now specialize in writing limericks for publication.

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author avatar The Rose that grew
17th Sep 2012 (#)

lovely poem

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author avatar Don Rothra
18th Sep 2012 (#)

Thanks Rose

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author avatar Retired
18th Sep 2012 (#)

Nice work Don. Good to see you posting here!

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author avatar Don Rothra
18th Sep 2012 (#)

Thanks, Nina

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author avatar LOVERME
18th Sep 2012 (#)

beautiful thought
as was prevalent in 2003.. times and definitions of love have changed since
The computers help make superficial love..ask boys guys and gals

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author avatar Don Rothra
18th Sep 2012 (#)

Thanks Loverme

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author avatar Buzz
18th Sep 2012 (#)

Lovely poem, Don.

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author avatar Don Rothra
18th Sep 2012 (#)

Thanks Buzz

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author avatar Delicia Powers
18th Sep 2012 (#)

Lovely indeed...

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author avatar Don Rothra
18th Sep 2012 (#)

Thanks Delicia

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author avatar Vartika
18th Sep 2012 (#)

lovely, as beautiful as love itself

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author avatar Don Rothra
18th Sep 2012 (#)

Thanks Vartika.

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
18th Sep 2012 (#)

Love is our greatest ally to fight war and injustice. True love can move mountains! Love is universal and beyond language. Lovely poem Don, thanks for the share - siva

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author avatar Don Rothra
18th Sep 2012 (#)

Thanks Siva.

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author avatar vpaulose
22nd Sep 2012 (#)

Nice poem dear Don. Thank you.

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author avatar LOVERME
12th Oct 2012 (#)

I recall love and beauty too

when summer rays
peeked through the silken curtains,
they fell upon your silently dreamy face
I pulled the curtain
so that the sun doesn't show
I loved to see you smile in your dreams
wiping a dew
from the forehead too,
was such a pleasant thing to do…
then the wind gushed in
you felt a chill
turned over towards me …
twas then upon your lips
I planted a kiss..
twas so sweet and sugary
how I wished you knew,
then when you opened half an eye
like a flower
I kissed your eyes brows too
you smiled
Loverme said hold it
and a camera trick did do.
till today I dream of those mornings too
time has lapsed
we are old
but never will we say adieu
for like always I still love you.

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author avatar LOVERME
12th Oct 2012 (#)

posted here with your permission as you are a world class poet Don

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author avatar LOVERME
5th Nov 2012 (#)

i came again
to find out how ur doing
where are you???
hope you are well

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
29th Dec 2012 (#)

Dear Don, missing your poems and their subtle meaning. Hope you are fine. Wish you Happy New Year - siva

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