eyes and hair

LOVERME By LOVERME, 2nd Mar 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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This poem was composed long long ago and 16 comments fell as my share within moments Wow you will love it for its simplicity

POETRY

SOME EYES

LOVELY HAIR

GOD'S GIFT

FEW GET






BROWN HAIR BLUE EYES


brown hair and lovely blue eyes




she has brown hair
that makes me stare

her eyes are like blue
like I see the sea in you...


she looks so fair
yeah does at me glare

then as she stares
she shakens my hair


I have very little in any case
I will not mind

if she pulls the rest....



what more can i sacrifice

from my balding head




wiki again warns me

we are hungry

for some more

so add on else .........

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Eyes, Eyes On Me, Eyes To See, Eyes Vision, Eyes Wide Shut, Eyesight, Hair, Hair Color, Hairstyle

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author avatar LOVERME
2nd Mar 2013 (#)

thanks Steve
they say wiki doesn't pay ..then who does anyway
but wikis does display
and you get readership right away ...
what's money here tuppence....

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author avatar Susan Jane
2nd Mar 2013 (#)

Thanks for sharing this poem.

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author avatar LOVERME
3rd Mar 2013 (#)

so kind of you Susan

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author avatar Retired
2nd Mar 2013 (#)

Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.

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author avatar LOVERME
3rd Mar 2013 (#)

thanks to you toooooo

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
3rd Mar 2013 (#)

You are getting carried away Loverme by physical beauty. I am thinking of Samson and Delilah story. He tells Delilah that he will lose his strength when he loses his hair. So watch out, as we want your daily poetry right in here! None should pull out what is left! siva

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author avatar LOVERME
3rd Mar 2013 (#)

hahahahaaa
you arer humourous too...

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author avatar LOVERME
3rd Mar 2013 (#)

hahahahaaa
you arer humourous too...

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author avatar johnbee
3rd Mar 2013 (#)

Am I hearing what is intended. Or does this poetry need to mended. I see deeply what is intended. But with simple minds tis not comprehended. Like mine.

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author avatar LOVERME
3rd Mar 2013 (#)

the poet need not be defended

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author avatar LOVERME
9th Mar 2013 (#)

693 reads yet!

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