freedom not stars

LOVERME By LOVERME, 14th Jun 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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The only right that ought never to be taken away from any one born is... FREEDOM

birth right


sad
Peter missed giving a star


I worked hard for it
Johnny would have given
a scotch along with it

what is freedom you ask me
as now I am in a prison
of my own creativity….

soul and mind ought to be free
just like the wind
the breeze
along the shores of endless seas
come along with me
as I fly within my mind’s eye
shackled to the constraints within
but free mind I enjoy still ….

calm quiet and not nervy
this too shall pass
they say hopefully



my Lord twill….

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
14th Jun 2013 (#)

May you show all creativity, Loverme, unconstrained by human walls - siva

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author avatar LOVERME
14th Jun 2013 (#)

thank u shivaaaaa

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author avatar Stella Mitchell
14th Jun 2013 (#)

I would stay Free if I were you dear LOVERME...reaching for the stars can put such strain on that , we think is ours, by right to gain . so , stay upon the earthly plain , and be content therein ..( Maybe a new pic might help a wee bit , my friend :-} ) or there again ...may not . ( at least this comment has boosted your stats methinks :-x)
Bless you today .
Stella >I<

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author avatar LOVERME
14th Jun 2013 (#)

you are as wonderful
as much as I am funny ...
stars to me at my age
mean nothing
thanks for the glitter
Stella

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author avatar Terry Trainor
14th Jun 2013 (#)

What age will you be when you want stars my friend?

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author avatar LOVERME
14th Jun 2013 (#)

94

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
14th Jun 2013 (#)

step free step free oh Loverme...

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author avatar LOVERME
14th Jun 2013 (#)

just for funny cnn

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author avatar Carol
14th Jun 2013 (#)

An unusual and intriguing post Loverme, thank you

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author avatar LOVERME
15th Jun 2013 (#)

the intent should be sincere ...
thanks Carol ma;am

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author avatar johnbee
17th Jun 2013 (#)

Almost there and almost a free star.

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author avatar LOVERME
17th Jun 2013 (#)

just about almost jb

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author avatar LOVERME
18th Sep 2018 (#)

817 STARS ONLY ADD UP TO 1000 NEARLY

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