laying on a beach

LOVERME By LOVERME, 17th Jul 2014 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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laying on a beach..some lie some lay the beach is one whee lovers play and love openly display

laying on a beach

laying on a beach!



he smacked her bums

and

it stung '


she had laid her head

on his leg


she was stunned
when he turned

red hot steel

she caught a bone


then they were left by friends alone


twas the beach friends
they ran where


into the waters lair

none followed them there


sign of dignified

PRIVACY!


I knew they wanted more privacy

deep into the sea they went

no one saw them return

did they

ask the baywomen!

They may say...

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Beach, Beach Activities, Beach City Game, Beach Holiday, Beach Holidays, Beach In The Sun, Beach Sand, Beach Tour, Beach Wear, Beaches In Goa, Laying, Laying A Patio, Laying Hens, Laying On Of Stones

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
18th Jul 2014 (#)

Yes, things do go overboard as we are slaves of our emotions! siva

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author avatar LOVERME
18th Jul 2014 (#)

first hand eyes information ...
3000 plus more
on the beaches...
that day..
all vanish in moments
under the surfs of seas
any moment what can any one see or do or help to not to do

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author avatar Utah Jay
18th Jul 2014 (#)

Indeed they may...Nice work.

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author avatar LOVERME
18th Jul 2014 (#)

really visual though partial

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author avatar AnnH
19th Jul 2014 (#)

Nice poem, keep sharing more.....

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author avatar LOVERME
19th Jul 2014 (#)

thank you more positive people like u r needed on wiki

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author avatar Retired
19th Jul 2014 (#)

Love the visuals you write

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author avatar LOVERME
19th Jul 2014 (#)

and I love the imaginary part of visuals actually accomplished by so many thanks frnd

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author avatar LOVERME
24th Aug 2016 (#)

745
laying on a beach!



he smacked her bums

and

it stung '


she had laid her head

on his leg


she was stunned
when he turned

red hot steel

she caught a bone


then they were left by friends alone


twas the beach friends
they ran where


into the waters lair

none followed them there

sign of dignified

PRIVACY!


I knew they wanted more privacy

deep into the sea they went

no one saw them return

did they

ask the baywomen!

They may say...

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author avatar LOVERME
12th Dec 2017 (#)

SELF PRAISE

You make many a heart throb
you have the sleep of many robbed
how dare you sleep as all are awake
knocking at your lovely gate

after you have abandoned the world
you will not know what we would miss
as you eternally sleep

till such a time comes your way
Dear poet of all times

We all request you to stay

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