lmmature love

Daughter of Deity By Daughter of Deity, 28th Jan 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/1fte9ew3/
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Love can happen with anyone.It knows no bars.Love is mad.

lmmature Love

In the silence of winter midnight
My eyes struck a small mouse so white.

sweet snout,small pink ears,oh so cuttie
What a marvellous natural beauty!

At that moment,I fell in love
An immature love with a mouse that hove!

I was then just eleven in age
And love with a mouse,such a craze?

Dawn to dusk,I'd be waiting for him
Waiting was now my whole life's theme.

A glimpse of him 'd make me smile
Here and there I'd be searching 'm all while.

At last I decided,with him forever I'd live
All world's happiness to 'm I'd give.

So used a rattrap at last one day
'I love you,dear' I'd to say.

After some hours the mouse got caught
Close to my heart,eventually he's brought.

Thus I begun-'Thou art most beautiful for me
See how I'm devoted to thee.'

Scared 'n' shivering,the mouse in a corner got shifted
Abruptly he made his body shrunk, bent and twisted.

I's taken aback,but suddenly I realised
I'd been at fault,my heart got fried.

With moist eyes I said,'I'll take
births again and again for my pure love sake.'

And I opened the mouse trap,thus the way
In undignified haste,the mouse fled away.

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Love At First Sight, Love Story

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I love to ink down my feelings in form of verses.

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author avatar n.c.radomes
29th Jan 2015 (#)

The verse is touching. Our love and appreciation for a thing is natural; we all have passed this age. Laurels for the expressve language. Write more!

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author avatar Daughter of Deity
30th Jan 2015 (#)

Thank u

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author avatar Kingwell
20th Mar 2015 (#)

Very touching my friend. Somethings are meant to be free. Blessings.

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author avatar kanu
6th Aug 2015 (#)

Amazing poem and amazing love cuz it was unconditional.

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