me without you

sakshi narang By sakshi narang, 4th Oct 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/3n3f4oir/
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A girl talking about her late beloved. the beauty lies in how she feels him still near her.

I FEEL YOU

Yes, I have lost you,
still I can feel you,
the strings of your guitar still calls for me.
still I find my fingers clutched into yours.
and I can hear the voice of water,
which you said, seem like the silver bed.
yes, I have lost you,
still I can feel you

the bell still rings with the same frequency,
and the folks of birds still come,
the breeze flows in the same way,
as you are playing with my locks.

people always ask,
do I miss you?

but I never missed you...
because still I can feel you.

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Girl Boy Guitar Water

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author avatar sakshi narang
An entrepreneur, very concerned about social issues, short tempered, liberal, want to change a lot of things in the world, believe in humanity.

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author avatar GV Rama Rao
5th Oct 2011 (#)

A good short poem. Keep posting more poems.

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author avatar GV Rama Rao
5th Oct 2011 (#)

A good short poem. Keep posting more poems.

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author avatar sakshi narang
5th Oct 2011 (#)

thanks..........

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author avatar Inayat
8th May 2012 (#)

Hey such a lovely poem :) Good going girlie <3 All the besttt! love it.

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author avatar Neha bhutani
28th Jun 2012 (#)

Heart touching lines .how beautifuly feeling overlappedmissing

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