quit or quiet

LOVERME By LOVERME, 2nd Aug 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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An angry young girl ...frets at her constant nagging lover ... she has the privilege to do what he does

quit or quite!



Quit or quite!



nice anger displayed
at a lover who crosses your way

and

Have signs to betray

and

take you astray,

if only you meant quit
to say

and

not remain quiet
till this final day


love is in the air
all in war and love is fair,

give him another chance
if you may

or

else quit immediately
as you now say

so do it right away
but not repent
anymore after today

quit if you wish to
just as you may





whenever I convert a comment to poetry

Wiki catches me and says

add on will you
Loverme what!

Tags

Abandon, Abandoned, Abandoned Baby, Abandoned Dog, Abandoned Infant, Abandoning, Abandonment

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author avatar LOVERME
The one and only LOVERME
Thanks friends for reading me,
its natural VIRGINOUS poetry
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author avatar redvakaurvaki
2nd Aug 2013 (#)

The choice is belong to her!

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author avatar LOVERME
2nd Aug 2013 (#)

THIS POEM WAS AS A CONSEQUENCE
OF A POET HERE WHO IS FED UP OF HER BF NAGGING HER
and letting her down...
all the time

this work relates to none else
please know this is a poetry site of wiki
nothing personal and false hood be kept aside

all those who comment on my work
must be members who know me
Wiki is sadly silent on this important point
KINDLY NOTE STRANGERS AND THOSE WHO STILL TRY TO MISLEAD KNOWINGLY...
.

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author avatar Teila
2nd Aug 2013 (#)

Choices! Well done.

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author avatar LOVERME
3rd Aug 2013 (#)

thanks Tella where have you been
to London
to see the baby King??

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author avatar Phyl Campbell
2nd Aug 2013 (#)

Quite a quiver of quit and quite to fill the quiet of a questing mind, LOVERME!

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author avatar LOVERME
3rd Aug 2013 (#)

hahahahaaa good humour urs

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
3rd Aug 2013 (#)

To call it quits is not easy for many and that is taken as a weakness in this world - siva

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author avatar LOVERME
3rd Aug 2013 (#)

yes thanks for your elucidation

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author avatar Trillionaire
10th Aug 2013 (#)

Thanks.

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