spouse’s desire
By LOVERME, 15th Sep 2013 | Follow this author
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A spouse’s desire..This is just a feeling I experience when talking with younger women married to olderish men
A spouse’s desire
A spouse’s desire
Oh lord all friends of mine
have been so relieved
when will you be so kind to me
this guy has prostrate
no seeds, to lay
his mouth does stink,
I can’t sleep a wink
he farts all through the night
my nose I have to cover alright
I can’t like a kiss
he also perhaps does miss
the whole night he does snore
oh now what a bore
all these years
I did ignore
now all those younger to me
have become totally free
they can go here and there
everywhere
but I am stuck to this old guy
till when can you, tell me
Oh! Lord when will my desire you fill
when can you his breath now still
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16th Sep 2013 (#)
comment with care
these r thoughts of someone .... I just share
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16th Sep 2013 (#)
Make all couples think for sure especially young ones taken in by kindly old men. Agreed better to think twice before taking the plunge what we get into. Inheritance can take a while to materialize; nothing comes easy in life! siva
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16th Sep 2013 (#)
yeah totally poetically imaginary poetry this ...
as so many seek advice
for free
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16th Sep 2013 (#)
Thanks.
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17th Sep 2013 (#)
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17th Sep 2013 (#)
Nice poem.
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17th Sep 2013 (#)
kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
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24th Sep 2013 (#)
I had a good laugh
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24th Sep 2013 (#)
as long as my poetry ...
makes folks like you laff ...
i aslo do laugh
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12th Oct 2016 (#)
A spouse’s desire
Oh lord all friends of mine
have been so relieved
when will you be so kind to me
this guy has prostrate
no seeds, to lay
his mouth does stink,
I can’t sleep a wink
he farts all through the night
my nose I have to cover alright
I can’t like a kiss
he also perhaps does miss
the whole night he does snore
oh now what a bore
all these years
I did ignore
now all those younger to me
have become totally free
they can go here and there
everywhere
but I am stuck to this old guy
till when can you, tell me
Oh! Lord when will my desire you fill
when can you his breath now still
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