take another look (poem about love ,realizing it before its to late )

poemgur1980 By poemgur1980, 24th Dec 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/csc2-zin/
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poem about a girls love that was so strong for her man he didn't realize how much he never did before he seen her die.


what's gonna happen to you while
seeing me take the last breath.
if i died today there's many thing's
you might regret.

1st) will be not telling me each time
you knew i was right.
2nd) would be how you let me die.
right before your eye's.

3rd) would be those question's you.
think inside your head.
4th) would be how you should have
told me before you seen me dead.

5th )would be how you let me go knowing
you had something to say.
6th) would be how miserable you.
are cause you watched me slip away.

7th) would be how your realizing
you cant ever get that chance again.
8th) would be how you fell now to
change or make a mend.

9th) would be memories of what
you did to push me away.
10th) would be how much you miss
all that love that i gave.

11th) would be you crying talking
to me from within.
12th )would be how you realized to
late cause now you wish you did.

13th) would be you thinking can she
hear me ? or praying to let me know .
14th) would be your sorry that
you ever let me go.

15th) would be it wasn't worth
loosing all you had .
16th) would be asking your self if
you can ever love again.

17th) would be your life getting
harder cause how you feel alone.
18th) would be what to do with
your life cause now it has no home.

19th )would be your lost and you
cant think straight anymore.
20th) would be to take another look
at yourself cause i said these thing's before

you see these thing's were
somehow me how i gave felt and took.
and wether you think you wish you had
inside you know you should.

the end

by:rebecca elizabeth pineda


Dying Love, Love And Soul, Realization

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author avatar poemgur1980
my name is (Rebecca Elizabeth Jimenez) married name is (Pineda .)
Im 33 yrs old been writing poems since the age of 9 I write about feelings ,love,inspiration,hope all kinds of poetry

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author avatar VJ Ay
24th Dec 2013 (#)

my favorite poemgurl is at it again...i'm sure goin to take another look. Well-done!

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author avatar poemgur1980
24th Dec 2013 (#)

thank you very much av for your sweet comments

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author avatar VJ Ay
24th Dec 2013 (#)

You will always remain welcome...*smiles*

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author avatar poemgur1980
24th Dec 2013 (#)

i mean vj ay

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author avatar VJ Ay
24th Dec 2013 (#)

I get it, we all do make mistakes...

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