that seed you planted (about a love that died before it grew)

poemgur1980 By poemgur1980, 29th Nov 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/2mzdledm/
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this poem is about love and how it died before it grew

that seed you planted

inside my heart you planted a seed
that died before it bloomed.
that seed needed water in order
to grow even though inside you knew.

you knew it was dying but still
didn't care until there was nothing left.
so you grabbed some dirt while crying out
loud then said what you regret.

it was then to late cause you watched
as it died then wanted to bring it back.
then you realized that seed was the love
of your wife that you once had.

so you see how much i loved you
died because you didnt care.
you took me for granted and all
that i gave cause i was alway's there .

but you let us die and watched us slip
away and wanted to get me back .
you suddenly notice that'll never
be cause my love was all you had .

the end

by:rebecca elizabeth pineda

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Died, Growth, Heart, Plant, Plant Seeds

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author avatar poemgur1980
my name is (Rebecca Elizabeth Jimenez) married name is (Pineda .)
Im 33 yrs old been writing poems since the age of 9 I write about feelings ,love,inspiration,hope all kinds of poetry

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author avatar Williamsji
29th Nov 2013 (#)

" inside my heart you planted a seed
that died before it bloomed.
that seed needed water in order
to grow even though inside you knew.."
A very good start, Excellent. Congrats, WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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author avatar Stella Mitchell
29th Nov 2013 (#)

Sad ...but good poem .
Many blessings
Stella ><

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author avatar poemgur1980
30th Nov 2013 (#)

thank you

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