the locket i always wanted (poem about a dream which wasnt a dream but a susprise)

poemgur1980 By poemgur1980, 22nd Nov 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/1umt8ocg/
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this poem is about a locket i wanted since i was small my dad promised to get me it one day but he passed away i told my husband about it and one day i got my locket .

the locket i always wanted

you gave me a locket with
2 pictures inside.
one of you on the left and
mine on the right.

you had me turn around
as you put it on my neck.
then you gave me a kiss
while saying im the best.

then i turned around and
hugged you tight.
said how much i loved you
and your the man in my life.

my necklace came undone
and fell to my feet.
i looked up to hand you it
and couldnt believe what i seen.

that the pictures inside wasnt
of me and you.
that's only what i wanted to
see and its something youd never do.

then i woke up and it
was all a dream .
looked all around me
i felt lonely as can be.

then i noticed something was
thrown by my shoes.
i picked it up 2 small
pictures and said it cant be true.

but it was a picture of
my husband and one of my dad.
he did this for me its
what i always asked.

for him to buy me a locket
and put 2 men in my life.
my husband on the left and
my daddy on the right.

it's what i always wanted
it made me want to cry.
then i find the locket
at my pillow side.

the end

by:rebecca elizabeth pineda

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Happy, Heart, Hopes Dreams, Poetry On Love

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author avatar poemgur1980
my name is (Rebecca Elizabeth Jimenez) married name is (Pineda .)
Im 33 yrs old been writing poems since the age of 9 I write about feelings ,love,inspiration,hope all kinds of poetry

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author avatar Williamsji
23rd Nov 2013 (#)

Beautiful Verse, I enjoyed, Congrats
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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author avatar poemgur1980
23rd Nov 2013 (#)

thank you

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
23rd Nov 2013 (#)

Nice poem

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author avatar Williamsji
23rd Nov 2013 (#)

The image of locket is a typical symbol of love, Regards WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
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author avatar poemgur1980
23rd Nov 2013 (#)

yes it is i believe in that

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author avatar Williamsji
23rd Nov 2013 (#)

Most of your poems are story-related themes of love and affection, which is being indirectly inspiring me to create more and more lyrics on love and beauty. Thanks for sharing your wonderful verses, Regards & Love from WILLIAMS & NIMMY (WIFE)
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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author avatar poemgur1980
23rd Nov 2013 (#)

your very welcome and i appreciate all your comments and the words you use i like alot my thanks to you as well.

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