the natural drive through lover's lane

LOVERME By LOVERME, 18th Nov 2012 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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This drive depicts the beauty nature wants to share with all but only those who have discerning eyes do

poetry

Montreal

Terrebonne
drive

and
autumn hue








The autumnal drive

I could visualize the drive from Montreal to
Terrebonne
What a lady autumn one does see
driving in exoticity
the flowering robes outstretched
beyond of what eyes can pry
the distant calls beckons
come by
and
the sprawling rainbows
as if they were for real
upon leaves of many a hue
all colours fresh and new
like a veil upon a newly wedded female
cast away the bridegroom’s loneliness..

as she kneels down to show
the hues she wanted to
how beautifully they grow
in the naturalness of admiration …
as we drive through the wilderness…
lady autumn beckons us and smiles too

Sir, come and enjoy nature will you …
a smile across my face did spread…
as I was about to leave the roadside
but for the ladies charms I am still alive ….
ere would've been dead no surprise..
rise lady Autumn did say
then I did with magnanimity
but with teary eyes.

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Autumn, Autumn Leaves Of Gold, Autumn Leaves Red, Autumn Poem, Autumn Season, Autumn Shades, Autumn Wind, Love, Love And Desire, Love And Soul, Love Poem, Love Poetry

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author avatar Judy Ellen
19th Nov 2012 (#)

I can't respond in poetry but I just want to say! This poem is so eloquent, lovely and full of delightful imagery!! I have been sick for a few weeks but hope to catch up on my reading next week! I love your poetry and your heart!!

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author avatar LOVERME
19th Nov 2012 (#)

thank you Judy
Hope you are much better
and soon you will compose one too
I assure you .

if I can do you tooo...

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author avatar Md Rezaul Karim
19th Nov 2012 (#)

Having a nice, soothing feelings like driving and cool breeze on my hair-
blues far away-
the sun peeps-
And the passing time -
Gone by-
Crossing the trucks -
Good bye..

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author avatar LOVERME
19th Nov 2012 (#)

why good bye???
do stay
I shall ruffle your hair anyway...
never goodbye ever again say
life is tooo short and the sojourn much lesser
stay friend
do stay

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
19th Nov 2012 (#)

Thanks for the share. I felt like partaking in the journey and also the lovely season of autumn - siva

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author avatar LOVERME
19th Nov 2012 (#)

you are most welcome
I 'll have friends drive you
now the trees are totally nude..
so still i must thank you siva... ur the LORD of all RINGS

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author avatar Stella Mitchell
17th Dec 2012 (#)

Oh dear ..what mischief here ?...I started in Autumnal cheer .. but now ..twould seem ..I've hit a squall ....and so..this tender soul ...will tiptoe out ..and say ...Good Day ..To One and ALL !

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author avatar LOVERME
17th Dec 2012 (#)

that woman is a troll
jealous since 4 years
and thinks
I.am her lost hubby
do take her with a rock of salt earnestly
only if you please...
ur decision

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author avatar LOVERME
9th Oct 2019 (#)

This drive depicts the beauty nature wants to share with all but only those who have discerning eyes do
poetry
partly autumnal inty
partly autumnal inty

Montreal

Terrebonne
drive

and
autumn hue







The autumnal drive

I could visualize the drive from Montreal to
Terrebonne
What a lady autumn one does see
driving in exoticity
the flowering robes outstretched
beyond of what eyes can pry
the distant calls beckons
come by
and
the sprawling rainbows
as if they were for real
upon leaves of many a hue
all colours fresh and new
like a veil upon a newly wedded female
cast away the bridegroom’s loneliness..

as she kneels down to show
the hues she wanted to
how beautifully they grow
in the naturalness of admiration …
as we drive through the wilderness…
lady autumn beckons us and smiles too

Sir, come and enjoy nature will you …
a smile across my face did spread…
as I was about to leave the roadside
but for the ladies charms I am still alive ….
ere would've been dead no surprise..
rise lady Autumn did say
then I did with magnanimity
but with teary eyes.

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