the sign of love (poem about a sign saying i love you after death )

poemgur1980 By poemgur1980, 29th Nov 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/h-5_yygc/
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this poem is about a sign a dad and his daughter had when ever theye'd say i love you and after the dad's death the wind was her sign .

the sign of love

by my dad's headstone i dug
a hole and put this tiny heart .
my tears kept falling inside the
hole as i'd say wed never part.

my hands were muddy by the time
i was done i wiped them on my shirt.
i then laid besides dad's grave that day
telling god how much it hurts.

the skies were cloudy it was getting
dark so i sat up and talked to him.
i put my hand over the heart i buried
then whispered this love wont end.

right then as i said my last word
the wind blew very strong.
i kissed ,my dads picture before i
left and that emptiness inside was gone.

remembering how dad drew a heart
then would point his finger at me.
as i did it back that feeling inside took
over everything.

the end

by: rebecca elizabeth pineda

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Sign, Signs Of Love, Wind

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author avatar poemgur1980
my name is (Rebecca Elizabeth Jimenez) married name is (Pineda .)
Im 33 yrs old been writing poems since the age of 9 I write about feelings ,love,inspiration,hope all kinds of poetry

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author avatar Johnny Knox
29th Nov 2013 (#)

Very touching an emotional, bring tears to the eyes

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author avatar Stella Mitchell
29th Nov 2013 (#)

Yes , very moving Rebecca .
God bless you
Stella ><

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author avatar Williamsji
30th Nov 2013 (#)

Rebecca Elizabeth,
Highly emotional in theme, well narrated, Congrats, Regards & Love from WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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author avatar Retired
30th Nov 2013 (#)

"Excellent Piece"

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author avatar LOVERME
30th Nov 2013 (#)

too good

nothing is unfair ...
Your god gave you
...a return ticket


My Quote''
;;Let the guillotine do
what it has to,
whose hands
it doesn’t matter...;;

thank you

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author avatar poemgur1980
30th Nov 2013 (#)

thank you all so very much im sorry i havent written back sooner ive been really sick

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author avatar waterhorse
2nd Dec 2013 (#)

Great poem. Hope you're feeling better now, poemgur1

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author avatar Williamsji
2nd Dec 2013 (#)

Too emotional and loving, Regards, WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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author avatar poemgur1980
3rd Dec 2013 (#)

thank you waterhorse

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