to whosoever guilty

LOVERME By LOVERME, 30th Sep 2012 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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Some folks are cruel, unmindful, remorseless jealous venomous and contagious.... this poem is a dedication in their memory.This has no relevance to anyone living or dead.

poetry


simply a view
exhaustion
limitation exasperation




the bitching


give her this cup to drink
like nectar concentrate
of a billion ,
so that she savours all of it
and the pen in her mind
does stick like glue
that once firms in
can’t be moistened a bit
it stays in for the century she lives
till she avoids all bitching
still in her blood
it shall turn into poison
of which all others may be driven
as remorse is not on her mind
let this human milk of kindness
her remind,
the last words can stink in
once some ones is bitten
a rabid dog dies first
then the victim

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Guilt, Guilt Complex, Guilt Of Past Regime, Guilty, Guilty By Association, Guilty Feelings, Guilty Heart, Guilty Pleasure, Guilty Pleasures

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The one and only LOVERME
Thanks friends for reading me,
its natural VIRGINOUS poetry
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author avatar Judy Ellen
30th Sep 2012 (#)

In my reply to you in your comment box I forgot to mention that poetry does not have to be 500 words. I also think that 400 words would be sufficient for a star page. The most important thing is that it has keywords to draw readers and/or search engines. Please do email me!!

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author avatar Judy Ellen
30th Sep 2012 (#)

I wish I knew how to write non rhyming poetry like you do. I just don't have the knack. Great poem by the way.

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author avatar LOVERME
30th Sep 2012 (#)

thank you
it takes six decades

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author avatar Teila
1st Oct 2012 (#)

Nice job!

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author avatar LOVERME
1st Oct 2012 (#)

thank you Teila

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author avatar DuitByJames
3rd Oct 2012 (#)

Oh MY good cake and icing; you are far from choppy and out of sorts. Work on the craft the speed comes with time. You know there's a change don't you? Very good.

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