too late ( poem about a guy that waited to long to give a ring to his girl )

poemgur1980 By poemgur1980, 5th Dec 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/3u0306ok/
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too late is a poem about a girl that loved her man so much she waited for a very long time to see if he cared but as he gave her a ring one day inside of her felt different and she gave it back because her love for him was gone.

too late

one day you gave me a ring
engraved with your love.
i then gave it back to you
as i said it wasn't enough.

Ive told you many times
you don't know what it is.
you'd tell me to show you
knowing Ive Alway's did.

you grabbed onto my hand
while trying to give it back.
i told you how its to late cause
you took all i had.

cause love talks to your heart
as it shows you the truth.
and that's the way my life has
been all these years waiting on you.

to me it's not about a ring or
the thing's that you can buy.
the only thing i ever asked of you was
to show me you love me inside.

the end

by:rebecca elizabeth pineda

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Engraved, Lost Love, Ring

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author avatar poemgur1980
my name is (Rebecca Elizabeth Jimenez) married name is (Pineda .)
Im 33 yrs old been writing poems since the age of 9 I write about feelings ,love,inspiration,hope all kinds of poetry

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author avatar Avaysa
6th Dec 2013 (#)

nice poem

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author avatar Lady Aiyanna
6th Dec 2013 (#)

One gave me the ring,
That I adorned to this day.
Showing forever love,
That is eternal to stay.

I wear it in my heart and soul,
Creating my infinite life.
For I am who I am supposed to be,
The True and eternal Wife.

I hold on to that ring forever,
Showing the love so true.
We have our shares of ups and down,
Including feelings of being blue.

But its all about the endurance,
That shows the Power of Love.
I once waited for that Ring,
That came from heavens Above.

Now I am eternal and whole,
With love that is meant to be.
Its who I am in this true world,
I am blessed with my family.

By Anisha Achankunju (C) Lady Aiyanna 7th December 2013

I put the ring again on the husband's hand last year on this day and consolidated the union to his family who was not willing to accept us as a couple despite giving them a grandchild.

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author avatar Stella Mitchell
7th Dec 2013 (#)

Things ...no matter how valuable, will ever be able replace true love my friend .
God bless you with His peace and love today
Stella ><

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author avatar Retired
8th Dec 2013 (#)

Heartfelt and emotional Poemgur1... I've never felt a ring meant true love but your commitment to each other that made the relationship.

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