up there in the sky (poem about a fathers death )

poemgur1980 By poemgur1980, 29th Nov 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/2ca6glc3/
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this poem is about a fathers death that his daughter took really hard

up there in the sky

up there in the sky
is my dad watching me.
way down here below
im looking up trying to see .

i call out his name
while asking jesus why.
how could he let him suffer
that awful night when he died.

i yelled out to god why not
take me take my life instead.
im nothing without my dad id
rather off be dead.

i was supposed to be with
him every second he was alone.
im so stupid its all my fault
for wanting to be at home.

forgive me my father for i
know that you can see.
im miserable in every way
i wish it had been me.

the end.

by:rebecca elizabeth pineda

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Dealing With Death, Death Of Loved One, Father

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author avatar poemgur1980
my name is (Rebecca Elizabeth Jimenez) married name is (Pineda .)
Im 33 yrs old been writing poems since the age of 9 I write about feelings ,love,inspiration,hope all kinds of poetry

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author avatar Mark Gordon Brown
29th Nov 2013 (#)

But do you think your dad would have wanted to live without you?

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author avatar Johnny Knox
29th Nov 2013 (#)

Rebecca very sad, i fope the best for you and God rest your father's soul

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author avatar poemgur1980
29th Nov 2013 (#)

mark no my dad would not have wanted to live without me

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author avatar Williamsji
30th Nov 2013 (#)

Touching, heart-breaking, and your imaginary is pure and celestial, May God shower you all life blessings, Regards & Love from WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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author avatar poemgur1980
30th Nov 2013 (#)

thank you all for caring so much it really means alot to me

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