wow frizzled

LOVERME By LOVERME, 3rd Sep 2012 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/226lrp7q/
Posted in Wikinut>Writing>Poetry

This poem compares the minds of cryptic's and sexual maniac's who deem themselves as poets

Poetry


shriveled
frizzled
slumped
dimpled and now
weird





frizzled



no one has the right
to question an author
why he wrote such and such,
you have no power to comment
on ones character,
twill be considered blasphemy
and
ye all ought to know it.

yet all folks have the birthright to condemn,
within frames of decency
then say what one may

but wait what authority
in heaven or earth
does bestow upon you
the power to judge

you are just another self centered identity
this much said should be sufficient,
for bloated personalities
God bless the author
of course
the reader too
both equally

Tags

Critical Poem, Critical Thinking, Criticism, Criticizing, Critique, Sexual Desire, Sexuality

Meet the author

author avatar LOVERME
The one and only LOVERME
Thanks friends for reading me,
its natural VIRGINOUS poetry
that comes my way

Share this page

moderator Steve Kinsman moderated this page.
If you have any complaints about this content, please let us know

Comments

author avatar Lady Aiyanna
6th Sep 2012 (#)

Its your personality that comes alive,
That is your character that does survive.
You think the One Eyed snakes your way,
Moving in rhythm to swoon and sway.

Do you think we all don't know,
When I start with the I told you so.
Its the person who I really am,
Number Thr3e the Pearl in Clam.

Protected and covered by Creation and all,
Loved and Cherished by everyone on call.
I am the anthem who sings the praise,
As the doe eye brings my raise.

With harmony and rhythm touching my all,
Perfect tempo standing tall.
To the beat he steps up the dance,
Escaping with treasure no backward glance.

Its my heart he stole with pride,
To find a place so deep inside.
While never died since the age of Three,
Giving rise to the Land of Mystery.

He is the man who took my all,
Held me close when the world did fall.
Teaching me his life in the world I drew,
Which is the Enigma to all but few.

In moments of pain all turned their back,
I cried and screamed what do I lack.
I went back in time forever to see,
The fault was them and never me.

I moved myself to customised fit,
Textured myself to create that hit.
Moving and grooving through rushes of time,
Bringing back the power that is so sublime.

Its the smile and laughter that I hold close,
As the river so steadily flows.
With the current playing the music deep,
I all my secret deep within me keep.

Never frizzling its the world of pain,
For I never go down the memory lane.
I send the world down the path forever to see,
This is what all of just did to me.

Did you think I would just walk away,
Leaving behind all the shades of grey.
I grabbed my happiness and took it all back,
And got my whole life perfectly back on track.

Now the whole world is coming to see,
Is this the one who is really me.
For I created the furor that not could digest,
But the whole world my anthems did ingest.

With tears pouring they step away,
With wet cheeks and shades of grey.
While I walk with the anthem of love,
Who kisses me each time way up Above.

Giving me the countenance here to see,
With the lyric that is done for free.
I never ask for the rise of fame,
Its with the Creator and all in the name.

I brandish the sword neither left nor right,
I just do things when out of sight.
Creating the trail that is meticulous and clean,
In the world of the Sun that is pristine.

By Anisha Achankunju (C) Lady Aiyanna 6th September 2012

Reply to this comment

author avatar Lady Aiyanna
6th Sep 2012 (#)

Its your personality that comes alive,
That is your character that does survive.
You think the One Eyed snakes your way,
Moving in rhythm to swoon and sway.

Do you think we all don't know,
When I start with the I told you so.
Its the person who I really am,
Number Thr3e the Pearl in Clam.

Protected and covered by Creation and all,
Loved and Cherished by everyone on call.
I am the anthem who sings the praise,
As the doe eye brings my raise.

With harmony and rhythm touching my all,
Perfect tempo standing tall.
To the beat he steps up the dance,
Escaping with treasure no backward glance.

Its my heart he stole with pride,
To find a place so deep inside.
While never died since the age of Three,
Giving rise to the Land of Mystery.

He is the man who took my all,
Held me close when the world did fall.
Teaching me his life in the world I drew,
Which is the Enigma to all but few.

In moments of pain all turned their back,
I cried and screamed what do I lack.
I went back in time forever to see,
The fault was them and never me.

I moved myself to customised fit,
Textured myself to create that hit.
Moving and grooving through rushes of time,
Bringing back the power that is so sublime.

Its the smile and laughter that I hold close,
As the river so steadily flows.
With the current playing the music deep,
I all my secret deep within me keep.

Never frizzling its the world of pain,
For I never go down the memory lane.
I send the world down the path forever to see,
This is what all of just did to me.

Did you think I would just walk away,
Leaving behind all the shades of grey.
I grabbed my happiness and took it all back,
And got my whole life perfectly back on track.

Now the whole world is coming to see,
Is this the one who is really me.
For I created the furor that not could digest,
But the whole world my anthems did ingest.

With tears pouring they step away,
With wet cheeks and shades of grey.
While I walk with the anthem of love,
Who kisses me each time way up Above.

Giving me the countenance here to see,
With the lyric that is done for free.
I never ask for the rise of fame,
Its with the Creator and all in the name.

I brandish the sword neither left nor right,
I just do things when out of sight.
Creating the trail that is meticulous and clean,
In the world of the Sun that is pristine.

By Anisha Achankunju (C) Lady Aiyanna 6th September 2012

Reply to this comment

Add a comment
Username
Can't login?
Password