you are too intelligent for my dwarfed mind to comment

LOVERME By LOVERME, 2nd Nov 2012 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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You are too intelligent for my dwarfed mind to comment is a satire maybe to place a guy in his scabbard as his brief shows far below


cats whiskers
some one
another one
two some

you are too intelligent for my dwarfed mind to comment

none the less
remember we all have cycles
in the human system
and memory
also in the universe
even blind can see ....

the water levels will rise
and the distance
between the surface and the sun will reduce
and the sun's rays will entice
all surface waters
then return the vapours
to from where they belonged ...

the heights of the icebergs
will again be strong ,
the water levels will subside

another generation will have a joy ride
on our faces foolish
they will all say
the guys,
You and I
they mean, ran away.

hahhaaha then
where will you and I be?
besides others
could be!


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author avatar Judy Ellen
2nd Nov 2012 (#)

Very eloquent!!

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author avatar LOVERME
2nd Nov 2012 (#)

thanks for your return you have come out of Sandy
hopefully you will read the ones you missed

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author avatar Md Rezaul Karim
2nd Nov 2012 (#)

Everything has got a life cycle,
We too?
Not sure!

How is the poem?
Frequent flying-
Like fluid-
Smooth and solid-
Like silk and fresh.

Thanks for sharing.

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author avatar LOVERME
2nd Nov 2012 (#)

each poet has his own imagination
each poem is just wonderful,
don't go in for cyclic reality
or grammar too
just compose the poem you love to ...
for its all emotions only
what of love it has so many meanings...
yours and mine are different too read my poems if you wish to

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author avatar LOVERME
2nd Nov 2012 (#)

if I were to be in a dream as you profess

I’d rather stay in the framework
of that dream
for my life
this one and thereafter
if there be one

Yet if i were to remain confined
to the lovely dream
I may add that I’d become immortal
as I would be locked up
till eternity ..

the above comment
is to wash off all sullenness ...
of the one
who is no one to anyone
but a solitary lost one
as jealous can be
so that none comment on my poetry
as she vomits all over the pages
get lost will thee!

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author avatar DuitByJames
3rd Nov 2012 (#)

I am glad to comment after so long. My father was very ill and passed on last Friday. Life has been trying to bully me lately. Thanks to you for some of your poetry has made me happy and some sad. You helped me remember again that life is not always about choices but equally of appreciation. I have been following with little time for writing; so a commit may cause disruption until it crashes into something but it won't stop me from commenting. I saw flies taking food from the cats bowl. The cat didn't get jealous. I spilled some milk and the cat drank it. What do you think I did? Hah ha ha. You are with many people in their thoughts/books. I have taken the locks off all my doors and found that some of the items left there are gone. Thank You for being You!

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author avatar LOVERME
3rd Nov 2012 (#)

I am intensely sad about your loss
I lost mine almost five decades since
but time heals
we have to endure,
what we can’t cure
we have the will to survive,
as much as we do
and have to
God bless you,
for your generous words,
it elates me, as I am of some use
to those who are at times,
in a position which may be worse.

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author avatar LOVERME
4th Nov 2012 (#)

when my words fall on deaf ears i have to obviously turn deaf
let's ignore NARCISSISTS
but for how long that' one needs medication..

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author avatar LOVERME
5th Nov 2012 (#)


A message to Rose aka Aiyanna
Please refrain from stalking and posting childish messages to this excellent poet.
She has a talent you could only dream of.

Message sent by Wikinut

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